Comments on: Novel Excerpt

By: Ember

Ember — Sun, 05 Oct 2008 17:36:24 +0000

Nice job!

I love it so far and I’m really glad you’re pursuing your dream. Believe me, I want to be there too, but I don’t have enough patience.

Hahaha.

Love always,

Ems

By: Rosie

Rosie — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 16:47:58 +0000

Ah so you caught on. Yes that is a hidden message, but at the same time she is being cynical as well. She is a complicated character to say the least.

By: Xavia

Xavia — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 17:01:12 +0000

I love it, so what is she? she refers to him as a ‘mere simple human boy’ is there a hidden message to us in that sentence or is she just cynical?

By: Megori

Megori — Wed, 11 Jun 2008 22:22:56 +0000

I like it. It’s very interesting thus far, but there are a few minor grammatical errors that could use a bit of work, just for clarification’s sake. I was somewhat confused for a little bit, but that’s cause my mind’s always in the gutter lately…I kept hoping this was going to be a BL novel. *headdesk* Lol. I like it though, even if it isn’t. =D

By: Jehmy

Jehmy — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 05:05:20 +0000

I like it! It’s an interesting first chapter.

By: Shukaku

Shukaku — Wed, 04 Jun 2008 09:31:35 +0000

I really enjoyed reading the excerpt. Just that little bit has me drawn. I’d love to read the rest, when you get it done!

By: luz

luz — Sat, 31 May 2008 02:02:48 +0000

the story was madd interested. i loved it……….i want more lmao